Betrayal -Why sunflower faces the sun?
There are many things which mankind is unaware of. Some
stories which are not discussed in the history perhaps because they were infamous
and not known to the people of its own time. One such story is of Surya and Meenakshi.
Long ago in the year of 1896 there lived a girl 16 years
old with the name Meenakshi, beautiful and adorable. Her education was
discontinued at an earlier age as the attitude of people of that time remained.
But she was fortunate enough to at least study till initial girls gurukul schooling.
She was beautiful, elegant with thick long braided hair almost touching her
knees, fair complexion, and big eyes resembling lotus petals, sharp nose and
sweet voice. She had all qualities required for a beautiful Indian bride
pre-installed in her. Her life went on smoothly with no complaints and no regrets,
happily swaying away with the tune of fate and destiny. She used to giggle and
have fun with her friends (girls). She was not allowed to talk to boys except for
her father and her younger brother. The girl in fact was utterly crazy, naughty
and full of life, spreading smiles across faces of the people she encounters.
Among all her friends Padma was a kind of bestie for her. She would sneak out
of home at times just to have and make fun along with Padma.
Days went on well
until she and her friends thought of doing something crazy. They decided to try
going to temple in the mango farm which was believed to be powerful but
haunted. Meenakshi was not so courageous but loved doing such daring deeds
along with her friends. They worked out a plan to get Meenakshi out of her home
and they succeeded in its implementation too. “Ssshhhh!!! Padma don’t make
sounds and put those anklets away. My father may get up.”Meenakshi feared her
dad a lot. In fact the whole family did. But she never knew probably of how
much her father cared and loved her. In no time she was on street walking brisk
fully along with her friends. Within 5 minutes they reached the place of
haunted temple through a shortcut discovered before day. With the fear of being
caught they completed their offerings and prayer in 10 minutes. Then something
strange happened. Suddenly they heard a kind of weird noise and were terrified.
According to the village there was a belief that whoever turns back and casts
their vision back on the temple after completing their worship will die a painful
death, though an exception persists that a person can revisit the temple any
number of times.
On hearing the noise
they started walking quickly on toes in a line with Padma at the beginning and Meenakshi
at the last in a row of five friends. Suddenly something made Meenakshi’s
breathe to be halted. A hand pulled her back by her waist. She dint open her
eyes and kept them closed tightly with a fear of casting her sight over the
temple knowingly or unknowingly. She dint know who it was. She was drizzling in
sweat of fear dripping by her brow. She sensed that all her friends have left.
She was unable to speak as a hand covered it up. She could hear her heartbeat
and her breath. Now the person holding her came so close to her that she was
able to hear even his breath. It came close to her and whispered in her
ears”shshshshs!!! There is nothing to fear. Don’t make noise. I am removing my hand.”
it was a male voice. As he did she took a gulp and asked him in whispers with a
trembling voice.” who...who are you?” “I am a guy whom you will never forget in
your life once known, who will even disturb you in dreams and whose thoughts
will always linger around you and I don’t like boasting but have lots to say
about myself. You will surely curse yourself for not opening your eyes and
seeing me this night.””Don’t worry that will never happen, “said Meenakshi
pushing him away from herself with the force of her two beautiful palms. He
immediately pulled her close by her waist and whispered again in her ears” by
the way you are beautiful.” He was so close to her that she could feel the puff
of his breath over her cheek. Saying so he set her free and walked away. There
were mixed feelings hitting upon her instinct. Fear, fascination, adventure, excitement,
innocence, happiness and above all confusion. With this all stuff happening
inside her head she opened her eyes all of a sudden with great zeal throbbing
her from inside to once check out who that guy actually is. In the darkness
with faded light being cast upon by the rising sun it was very unclear and
misty. She could only find out that he was tall and of slim personality with
great build. She allowed her silly smile of fascination for that guy to let
free on her face. Thinking about the guy she walked away to home silently. She
has done something that should not be done actually. She had casted her eyes
upon the temple as soon as she opened her eyes to look for that guy. If it was
the guy or the temple no one knows but for sure it was the night that ruined
her life.
She went home and tried to sleep back but the thoughts of
the guy kept disturbing her. At that moment she remembered his words. ‘What he
said is true probably!’ she thought for herself. That very morning as soon as
daily puja was done at Meenakshi’s home she ran to Padma to tell about everything
that has happened.” And before leaving he even said that I was beautiful!!”
“But Meenakshi till now many people have given you compliments for your beauty.
What’s so special in this?” asked Padma with a puzzled expression for she has
never seen Meenakshi so excited and lost in dreams.”I don’t know about all
that, but he was different for me and I loved that feeling. I want to meet him
again. Probably today night near the same old temple?”Meenakshi’s level of dare
seems to be soaring high. To Padma she was not the same Meenakshi who used to
fear her father to the peaks even to ask him to go out for a walk with friends.
A night has brought many changes in the innocent teenage girl.
She again managed to sneak out of her home and went to the
temple with a hope to find the guy in search of whom she was there that night
although she dint even know his name. A shadow appeared near the temple. “I knew
that you will surely come” saying so he came completely into light for the girl
to see his face for the first time. His face was glistering with charm, eyes of
a hawk and the voice has already done its magic on the girl’s heart. The girl blushed slightly and went behind the
pillar of the temple to hide into her the pounding heart. He pulled her by her
hand and made her sit on the platform of temple along with him. “So you finally
came for me?”, asking so he held her palm between his hands. “I dint come for
you. I just came back to revisit the temple as I felt it to charmingly
beautiful” so withdrew her hand from his grip.
“Never mind Meenakshi don’t feel shy.”
“How do you know my name?”demanded Meena, with her wide and
bewildered eyes staring at his lips waiting for a quick reply.
“I know everything about you and I also know that you know
nothing about me, not even my name. But before knowing my name you must get to
know another thing about me. I love you and I want you.”
Meena kept on staring at his lips and eyes confused about
how she needed to respond at that moment. She then slowly lowered her eyes
blushing her way out.
“My name is Surya. I guess you too like me. From tomorrow you
need not sneak out of your home to meet me. Just behind your friend Padma’s
home there is an old bungalow you can come there. “
Saying so he pulled her towards him kissed on her forehead
and bid goodbye. Thus from the next day onwards almost every day she would go
to meet him with an excuse of meeting Padma. Thus the love between the two
lovebirds has sprouted up. She never opened up her thoughts but she loved him a
lot. Whenever Surya confessed his love before her she would smile with a blush
and would remain silent. Two months passed since they first met but the feeling
that they both induced into each is much greater.
Surya hails from a small zamindar family who deal with the
land of the village and also acted as the medium between the villagers, farmers
and the English men. Once while Meena was running past Padma’s home to meet
Surya, one of the English soldiers caught a sight of her and became fond of
her. He silently followed her to watch her giggling and smiling with her palm
in Surya’s hand. This English soldier with bad intentions came towards Surya, cuffed
him and took him to a dark cellar.
He also terrorised Surya to get the girl for him or else he
would kill his parents and ruin their entire property. On the other hand Meena was worried about Surya,
not knowing why he was taken away by the soldier. Two days continuously Surya
was kept in cellar and was lashed to agree for the proposal. But he dint. Finally
the soldier brought down his parents before him and lashed his father. Surya instantly
begged the soldier to leave his father and agreed for the agreement.”
Surya met Meenakshi the other day. When she tried to inquire
he simply said there was nothing to worry about and lied to her saying that he
was cuffed just out of confusion. While caressing her hair he came nearer to
her and said” I have something important to say which i will tell you tomorrow
night. Come to the old temple where we first met at night 12’o clock. To keep
the suspense I won’t meet you tomorrow morning. I will be waiting for you. Don’t
make me upset.”
“Wait and see, I will reach the place before you,” said Meena
smiling at him innocently without a slightest hint of what was lying ahead.
“Sorry Meena!”
“Why are you sorry?” asked Meena with a puzzled expression.
“Just felt like saying.” And within moments they bid goodbye
to each other. Perhaps it was their last meeting. Meenakshi went back to her
home thinking and guessing out all beautiful stuff she might be hearing from
him the next day.
As planned she went to the temple and was waiting for him. Suddenly
she heard some footsteps proceeding towards her. But these sounded different
from those of Surya’s. She waited to look who it was and to her horror it was
the same soldier who hand once taken away Surya. He gave a cold smile and
starting marching towards her. With every forward step of his there was a
backward step put by Meena out of terror and confusion. He then walked quickly
towards her and held her hand. When she resisted he caught her by her hair and
slapped her. She cried and shouted for help but there was no one to hear her
cries except for the howling owls that too must have closed their eyes out of
shame. She was brutally beaten up to surrender herself to him and was
exploited. After the English soldier satisfied his hunger and desire he threw
her away on floor of the temple and went away. Bruised and crying out of pain
she dint go home. The whole village came to know of the way she was abused by
an English soldier.
Coming to know of
this her father could not bear the fact and died out of heart attack. Her mother,
brother and grandma decided to move out of the village and also asked Meena to
come along with them. But she said she was waiting for Surya. After the incident she didn’t go home and sat
near same temple floor waiting for Surya. Being unevenly covered she did not
eat ,drink or sleep but kept waiting for Surya with her eyes drenched in tears
of shame. Many people came near her to persuade her to leave the village. But she
kept on repeating the same thing that she was waiting for Surya and would keep
looking at the sun for its brightness to fade away and for the night to arrive.
She dint knew the fact that Surya and his family have left the village winding
up all their assets and would never return. With a hope to meet him she kept on
waiting without any food and sleep. Finally the day arrived when she had to bid
goodbye to her life and her last words were” I will never make you upset Surya.
Sorry that I cannot wait longer. “She
then uttered the words which she wanted to tell Surya at that night of betrayal
and thus never uttered till that moment-“ I love you Surya”. Speaking all into herself
her weak body breathed her last.
Her body was eventually taken away from that spot and from
the very spot there grew a flower from the crack- a sunflower. It would always
be facing towards the sun exactly the way Meenakshi used to when she waited for Surya.
So whatever be the science behind sunflower always facing the sun, but for the
people of that village it was Meenakshi soul instilled in sunflowers which is
still waiting for Surya.
nice story, it was all suspense till the last. is it fiction or it's a real story happened somewhere in gujarat or rajasthan?. anyway nice story.
ReplyDeletebut i thought the end might be revoluting against the english
Its not a real story......all stuff out of my imagination. thanks :)
DeleteWoW ....! Kavya , i didnt know u could write such beautiful stories !! Really It was amazing !
ReplyDeleteBravo !!
thanx ;)
Deleteit is a really nice story ... u wrote it tactfully ...:p
ReplyDeletethnx darls.....;)
Deleteno words.... fantastic.... if u want in my style champesinav po...
ReplyDeletethank you sirrr.....:D
Deletebetrayal ..
ReplyDeletethe name suits the story..
its a fabulous storyline....
nice work :)
thank u :D
ReplyDeleteWell that was amazing and beautifully written except for some grammatical errors.
ReplyDeleteGood one :)
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